Pace

Purpose of pace in Literature

The purpose of pacing in literature is to control the speed at which the story of moving. Pacing also can be used as a stylistic technique to create a specific mood and make the reader feel a certain way.

Varying the pace throughout a story is essential in keeping the reader gripped.

A slower narrative pace allows the writer to create emotion and suspense or provide a context about the story's world. A faster narrative pace increases action and tension while creating anticipation.

The plot would be too overwhelming if a book only had fast pacing. But if a novel is only slow-paced, the story would be too dull. Balancing scenes with a mixture of pacing allows the writer to build suspense and trigger interest from the readers.

The varying pace makes the characters' lives more believable to the readers too. During the slower pace scenes (in which characters are recovering from a dramatic event written at a fast pace), the reader can process the character's emotions along with them.

But how does this work? We will examine how specific devices can create and alter the pace.

Characteristics of pace in Literature

Now that you have a brief understanding of what the different paces in a narrative can do, here is a breakdown of the elements.

Plot

The different stages of the plot are affected by pacing. Story arcs can be split into three sections: (1) exposition/introduction, (2) rising action/complication and (3) falling action/denouement. Each section of the plot uses a different pace.

1. During the exposition, the pace can be slower as the writer must introduce the reader to a world they don't know about. The slower pacing gives the reader time to understand the fictional setting and characters. Texts do not always start with exposition; novels that start in media res plunge readers into the action sequence straight away.

2. When the protagonist enters the primary conflict and rising action stage, the pace will quicken. This is usually the point the writer wants to increase the stakes and tension. The climax is the time with the most urgency as the conflict and anxiety are at their highest. As such, the pacing is the quickest at the stage.

3. Finally, in the falling action and denouement/resolution, the place slows down as the story ends. All questions and conflicts are resolved, and the pace slows to a gentle end.

Diction & syntax

The type of words used and their written order also affect the pace. The general rule is that short words and short sentences increase the pace, whilst longer words and sentences decrease the pace. This is also relevant to paragraphs, chapters, or scenes.

So long descriptions with great detail and multiple uses of adjectives create a slower pace as readers spend a long time reading the scene.

Dialogue, however, would increase the story's pace as the reader is moved from one character speaking to another. It is also a great way to reveal new information concisely and quickly.

Using an active voice or a passive voice also impacts the pace of a story. Passive voices use wordier language and usually have a slower pace and subtle tone. The active voice is clear and direct, allowing a faster pace.

Genre

Different genres have certain known rules on pacing. For example, historical fiction and fantasy genres tend to have a slower pace as these stories need a lengthy exposition describing new worlds and places to readers.

Action-adventure or thriller stories have a faster pace as the main focus is to progress through the plot. As they contain many fast action sequences, the pacing is quick.

Cliff hangers

Writers can use cliffhangers to increase the pacing of their stories. When the outcome isn't shown at the end of a particular chapter or scene, the pace quickens as readers are curious to know what happens next.

When the outcome is prolonged, such as through several chapters, the pace increases. This is because the suspense builds in line with the reader's desire to know the outcome.

Fig. 1 - Cliff hangers are popular narrative devices.

Types of pace

As well as specific genres being known for certain pacing, some plot lines are known for a particular use of pace too. We will take a look at the four common forms of pace.

Pace of expectations

Readers begin to expect what will happen next at a certain point in a novel. Writers can play with these expectations by sometimes fulfilling them or making something unexpected occur instead.

Specific expectations are present for different genres. For example, a romance novel will end with the couple getting together; a detective story would end with the mystery solved; a thriller would finish with security and safety.

Writers can also play with the pace of expectations to encourage the reader or viewer to support a particular ending or concept.

Inner journey and pace

This type of fiction is character-driven and primarily deals with the protagonist's inward feelings. Rather than lots of car chases to increase the pace, not so much happens outwardly. Instead, the main action occurs within the protagonist's mind.

Tension is created by how intense the character's needs are. This is affected by a series of twists, complications and surprises that don't necessarily occur physically but affect the protagonist's inward feelings. Here it is the character's thoughts that drive the pacing.

Fig. 2 - Inner journeys often determine the pace of the narrative.

Emotional pace

Compared to the Inner Journey pace, this pacing focuses more on how the readers feel instead of how the characters feel. Writers can try to pace the reader's reactions: at one moment, you may feel like crying, yet the next, the text has you laughing out loud. This is an example of emotional pace.

Through the back and forth movement between scenes with tension and energy, the readers go through a series of emotions about what will happen next.

Moral pace

This is another pace set with the readers' reaction rather than the characters. Here, the writer plays with the reader's understanding of what is morally right and wrong.

For example, the novel's protagonist could initially be innocent and naïve and the antagonist an utterly evil villain. But, as the story progresses, the antagonist is portrayed as wise or not as evil as they initially seemed. And in contrast, the protagonist becomes arrogant and rude. Or do they? By seeding doubt into the reader, the writer can play with the moral greyness, challenging the reader to think and judge themselves.

Examples of pace in Literature

Here we will look at a few examples of pace in literature.

Pride and Prejudice (1813) by Jane Austen

Various subplots in this novel shift the story between different pacing. The scenes around the central conflict between Darcy and Elizabeth quicken the pace as the reader wants to find out the answer to the dramatic question: will the couple get together?

Yet the many subplots slower the pace, such as the relationship between Lydia and Wickham, the love between Bingley and Jane, and the relationship between Charlotte and Collins.

Austen also uses letters as a literary device to control the story's pacing. Her use of detailed descriptions and dialogue further slows the pace. Mrs Bennett is also used to slow down the pacing through her laments about her daughter's marriages and her portrayal of handsome suitors.

The Hound of the Baskervilles (1902) by Arthur Conan Doyle

In the below quote, Arthur Conan Doyle sets the scene of the English moorland during a carriage ride through Devonshire countryside.

The pacing slows down in Doyle's detailed description of the English moorland. In this exposition section, the pace is slower to introduce the reader to the new setting central to the story. The sentences are longer, more complex and descriptive, with many clauses, adverbs and adjectives.

The narration is more reflective, too, with the narrator Watson reflecting on how the landscape affects him. This dramatically contrasts with the novel's final fast-paced scenes, which reveal that Holmes has figured out the mystery whilst living in the moors.

Hitchhiker's Guide to Galaxy (1979) by Douglas Adams

Let's take a close look at the varying use of pace in Hitchhiker's Guide to Galaxy when Arthur Dent wakes up in the morning to a demolition site.

The short sentence consisting entirely of nouns quickens the pace. The directness allows the reader to fill in the blanks and understand what is happening.

The following sentence is much longer and more complex. The slower pace here matches the slow fogginess of Arthur's mind as he is slowly waking up and noticing the events around him.

The following sentence then is shorter again, picking up the pace. This sentence reverses the expectations of the reader and the character, who are all surprised by the bulldozer in front of Arthur's house. This is also an example of the pace of expectations.