Waiting for the Barbarians

Waiting for the Barbarians: Summary

Waiting for the Barbarians (1980) is set in an unspecified time in an unnamed colonial outpost, administered by an unnamed Empire. The local nomadic tribes are called ‘barbarians’ by the Empire's men. The nameless narrator is a Magistrate who merely seeks to ‘live a quiet life in quiet times’. The relative tranquillity of his remote outpost is interrupted by the appearance of Colonel Joll, sent by the imperialist Empire to investigate a rumoured ‘barbarian’ uprising. Colonel Joll sets up torture facilities to assist his goal of gaining intelligence on the potential rebellion.

Seemingly randomly selected ‘barbarians’ are caught by Joll and tortured to extract information. The Magistrate, until then a loyal Empire man, begins to question the process being followed by Joll. After a series of tortures and deaths, Joll leaves to journey to the capital.

During this time, the Magistrate meets one of the nomads; a young girl left behind by her people after they have been released from prison. He takes her to his home and cares for her wounds. She has been disabled by the torture metered out by Joll. As he tries to understand himself and the girl, he finds himself confused by his feelings of sympathy, sexual attraction and also a kind of judgement. In addition, he further questions whether the threat of a rebellion ever existed and the methods employed by the Empire. The girl and the Magistrate face ongoing communication challenges, and he decides to help her return to her people.

After a long journey to find her tribe, during which they sleep together, the girl and the Magistrate separate as she chooses to remain with her people. Having failed to convince her to return with him, the Magistrate returns to his outpost and is immediately imprisoned without trial for his involvement with the ‘barbarians’. After the Magistrate is tortured, Joll’s warrant officer, Mandel, further humiliates him in a mock execution, hanging him from a tree, naked apart from a woman’s smock. The Magistrate becomes a beggar in the town. The townspeople begin to leave when the ‘barbarians’ flood the fields in retaliation for the tortures. Mandel’s soldiers loot the town.

The soldiers sent by the Empire's Third Bureau to help Joll quell the apparent rebellion are defeated when the nomads lure them deep into the desert and steal their horses at night, leaving them without sufficient supplies or transport. Joll makes it back to the town to find that his right-hand man, Mandel has fled.

The Magistrate resumes his position in the outpost town, encouraging those that are left to begin to grow their own food in preparation for winter.

Waiting for the Barbarians: Meaning

There are many possible readings of Waiting for the Barbarians. J.M. Coetzee has said that it was a novel:

Although Coetzee is a contemporary South African author, he depicted the colonial outpost as a timeless, nameless and placeless one. The Empire is also not named. This allows the novel to become an allegorical one about themes and topics rather than a historical one or even one that views a specific current situation through the lens of morality.

Based on Coetzee's explanation of the novel, it can be said that Waiting for the Barbarians is about whether the end ever justifies the means. Specifically, it is about whether torture is ever justified.

Waiting for the Barbarians has been defined as a postcolonial novel, despite its setting in an unspecified time and location. Due to his approach to subjectivity and the elusive nature of truth, the novel has also been defined as postmodern.

Waiting for the Barbarians: Themes

Waiting for the Barbarians is a novel with many layers of meaning, but there are some key themes worth looking at in more detail.

Imperialism and the creation of the Other

The fictional Empire views the nomadic tribes as the ‘others’. By referring to them as ‘barbarians’ they directly place the nomadic people outside of what they consider to be civilised.

Joll, a loyal member of the Empire, is insistent that the 'barbarians' are planning an uprising, despite mounting evidence to the contrary. He tortures old people and children to gain information about the rebellion, which is both illogical and inhumane. It is unlikely that children or elders would be able to supply much truly useful intel, even if a rebellion was actually being planned by the 'barbarians'. Rather, it reflects the extremes of behaviour people considered 'civilized' are capable of when 'othering' is in effect.

The Magistrate tries to understand the 'barbarian' girl, but ultimately fails, possibly due to the extent of their many differences and the situation surrounding them. He tries to atone by washing her wounds and also to understand what was done to her by Joll. He has a variety of mixed emotions about her, often due to the power imbalance between them. These veer from the sympathetic to the sexual, and also involve a kind of judgement about the loss of her perceived 'wholeness' due to her trauma and torture.

Her disability and its related disadvantages are clearly visible to him, but her intelligence and wit remain less immediately obvious to him. It is only when she gets the chance to speak 'the pidgin of the frontier' that she shows herself to be 'a witty, attractive young woman.'

Interrogation and truth

Coetzee explores the relationship between interrogation and truth in Waiting for the Barbarians. He highlights the subjectivity and the elusive nature of truth, especially when it is linked to torture.

Colonel Joll's type of interrogation by torture would induce most people to say anything to end the experience. Of course, it would be unlikely to be the truth. The cruel and brutal torture would induce one to say anything to just stop the pain.

The Magistrate in his way practices a seemingly softer kind of interrogation in his effort to get the girl to tell him about what happened to her. His intentions are not the same as Joll’s, he is searching for understanding versus intel. Despite this approach and an apparently genuine wish to understand, he still does not really come to comprehend the extent of the girl beyond her trauma and disability.

Waiting for the Barbarians: Symbolism

There are many symbols and motifs used throughout Waiting for the Barbarians but a key one is Colonel Joll's black glasses. The novel opens with a description of them.

The dark glasses are multi-faceted symbols that represent the mask worn by the Empire and its administrators. They hide Joll's expression and allow him to see without being seen. Joll's dark, reflective glasses symbolise the controlling nature and the hidden intentions of the Empire. For Joll, they are also a means of separation from the 'barbarians' and even the frontier people, who have never seen, do not own or wear dark glasses. It adds to his sense of superiority.

Waiting for the Barbarians: Characters

The characters of the novel are often nameless, represented instead by circumstances and traits. The exceptions to this namelessness are the characters sent by the Empire. Similar to how the timeless, nameless location adds to the novel's allegorical nature, the nameless characters become allegoric representations of many people and places throughout history.

The Magistrate

The Magistrate is the flawed, unnamed protagonist and the first-person narrator. As an employee of the Empire, he experiences a crisis of conscience and identity when he is faced with the torture of people based on inconclusive rumours that remain largely unsubstantiated throughout the novel. He represents the idea of conscience. Although he is not always successful in understanding the full extent of the power dynamics at play or his role in them, he actively makes an effort to do so. This is contrasted with the character of Colonel Joll, who never seeks to understand, redress or atone.

The 'barbarian' girl

Captured with her family and tortured by Joll, the girl witnesses her father’s murder. She is left disabled by her torture and then left behind by her people. The Magistrate takes her into his home, tends to her wounds and tries to understand her, but without much success. His lack of understanding affects his portrayal of her in much of his narrative. He eventually helps her to return to her people. Beyond her obvious disabilities seen by the Magistrate, she shows wisdom, intelligence and wit. She potentially represents the colonised.

Colonel Joll

Joll is the high-ranking Empire man who arrives in the quiet, remote outpost to quell a rumoured 'barbarian' uprising. He uses extreme methods of torture to gain information and only succeeds in creating more tension than existed before his arrival. He is ultimately defeated after being outmanoeuvred in the desert. He is thought to represent imperialism or colonising empires.

^1. David Atwel. Composition and Craft: Waiting for the Barbarians, Life and Times of Michael K. 2020.