Tactile Description

How to Identify a Tactile Description

This is not as easy as it seems, because there is actually great ambiguity in many descriptions.

Returning to the tactile description and the gustatory description, the difference is easy enough to understand at the simplified level. A tactile description is about touching, while a gustatory description is about tasting. But if you think about it, isn’t taste a kind of touch? Your tongue needs to touch something, after all, in order to taste it.

The key is this: When identifying any sensory description, consider both what the sensor senses and how the sensor senses.

In our example, while the tongue is how in both instances, what it perceives is radically different. The sensation of tasting an apple is different from the sensation of its texture. Thus, by identifying what in a description, you can usually identify whether a description is tactile or gustatory.

The complimentary problem also exists. Sometimes, the what is ambiguous in a description. Consider a "sharp sword" in space. Because something can be both sharp to the eye and sharp to the touch, the what of this description—sharp—isn’t helpful in determining whether the description is tactile or visual. In order to identify that, you will need further context: you will need to know how this sharpness is sensed.

Given the context that the monster is feeling pain in its arm thanks to the sword, we can comfortably identify “sharp sword” as a tactile description in this context.

Objective Tactile Description with Examples

Objective tactile description involves literal touch. It is a description of somebody physically touching something, and how that feels.

All three of these descriptions are literal tactile descriptions, because they describe how things are to the touch of the tooth.

Fig. 1 - A tactile description of a rock isn't very appetizing.

Here are some examples that involve the most basic sensor of touch: the hand.

Of course, any part of the body with nerve receptors can sense touch, and tactile descriptions involving any other body part are also literal tactile descriptions.

Subjective Tactile Description with Examples

A subjective tactile description is opinionated. It is more interpretable than an objective tactile description.

In these examples, the description is totally a matter of opinion. There is no objective or verifiable proof of these descriptions.

Figurative Tactile Description with Examples

A figurative tactile description describes how something feels by comparing it to something else. Either the subject is not tangible or the description is metaphorical.

Figurative Tactile Description of Feelings

People feel emotions: the excitement of romance, the contentment of tranquility, the burning of anger. Many of the descriptions we apply to literal tactile descriptions can also be applied to figurative descriptions. Here are some examples:

Fig. 2 - Cookies causing major problems.

Not all figurative descriptions of emotions are tactile, though, so be careful. “I was screaming inside” is a figurative auditory description because the what is a scream, which is heard, not felt.

Figurative Tactile Description Using Simile and Metaphor

These tactile descriptions involve feeling real things, but the description of the feeling is not literal. It will use simile or metaphor to describe the feeling.

Figurative Tactile Description of Feelings and Ideas Using Metaphor

You can put it all together to create some intensely figurative tactile descriptions.

When to Use Tactile Description

Depending on whether you are writing an essay or a creative story, you will use tactile descriptions at different times.

Using Tactile Description In An Essay

If you are writing a report or paper on your physical observations of something, like in a description essay, you are likely to use objective tactile descriptions. Figurative tactile descriptions to describe emotions is not appropriate for a persuasive essay or scientific paper.

When writing a literary analysis, you may find yourself using the figurative tactile description of emotions to convey the state of mind of certain characters in the story. Emotions drive many characters, who in turn drive many plots, so when a character feels something strongly, it will probably be described and will probably be important.

Analyze these character descriptions to draw your own conclusions about the characters, how they feel, and why they act upon those feelings. The more powerful the tactile description, the more likely that feeling influenced something in the character and thus the story.

Using Tactile Description In A Creative Story

Use tactile descriptions to describe foreign objects, structures, and creatures. The more foreign something is, the more description you will probably need to cover it. If something feels unexpected, use tactile description to point that out to the reader as well. However, don’t describe how something feels unless a character is actively touching it. Doing otherwise is disjointing for the reader.

If a character feels something that has a strong emotional impact on them, describe it! For instance, if a character reaches into a magical black void, and it feels so cold that it chills them to the bone, make your reader aware of that. Try to make your reader feel the way the character does; paint an image in the reader’s mind that puts them right there. Make the reader feel as though they have put their hand into that horrible void.

Finally, figurative tactile descriptions are almost necessary in describing how your characters feel. Use these descriptions to let your reader into the head and heart of your characters. Whether you are writing a first-person story or a third-person story, you will want the reader to understand how your characters feel so that their motivations are clear. If a character takes a strong action in response to something, the figurative tactile description of their emotions can help the reader to understand the gravity of the situation.