Tone Shift

Tone Shift in Writing

It is easier to distinguish tone and tonal shifts in spoken word than in written word. When someone speaks, part of what is heard is the tone of their voice. The tone of someone's voice communicates many things, including how the speaker feels about the subject, as well as how they feel about the listener.

Understanding tonal shifts in writing require the reader to make an educated guess about what the author means. An author can communicate tone through literary devices such as:

• Diction – an author's choice and use of words.

• Irony – the expression of one's meaning through words that signify the opposite of what is said.

• Figurative language – the use of language that deviates from the literal meaning (including metaphors, similes, and other literary devices).

• Perspective – first (I/ we), second (you), and third-person (they, she, he, it) perspectives are ways of describing the point of view of the narrative.

A shift in tone always has significance, whether the author intends it or not. More often than not, an author is aware of their tone and chooses to break away from the established tone to create an effect for the reader.

Effect of Shifts in Tone

The effect in shifts of tone is often disruptive and very noticeable. Many authors use tonal shifts to their advantage and create a tone shift to guide the reader to a particular emotion or experience.

Think, for example, of The Lord of the Rings (1954) by J.R.R. Tolkien. We'll discuss the film version, as the visual format is helpful to illustrate the shift in the audience's experience. The film The Fellowship of the Ring (2001) begins with the background story of the ring and the evils that are hunting it. Next, we are taken to the shire, where the tone changes from intense and frightening to happy and peaceful. This tone change is helpful to get the audience to anticipate the dark forces that will eventually pursue the hobbits out of the shire.

Understanding shifts in tone is important to grasp an author's meaning completely. Reading a text critically requires you to interpret the tone, as well as the significance of any shifts in tone.

Examples of Shifts in Tone

A shift of tone can sometimes be subtle. Look for a change in rhythm or vocabulary that changes the way the poem makes you feel. Sometimes, you'll need to combine this tonal shift in feeling with context clues to fully understand what has changed and why.

There are seven ways an author can create a shift in tone in writing. These examples change the meaning of a piece of writing, especially when combined with relevant context clues.

Shift in Tone Through Setting

A description of a setting can seamlessly change the tone of a piece of writing. A good setting description can convey how the reader should feel.

The tone of this passage is nostalgic and tenderhearted. The writer describes the scene in such a way that we can sense the peace in the setting. Notice the shift in the continuation of the scene below:

Now the tone has shifted from peaceful to horror as we anxiously read to see if the boy will reach the safety of his mother.

Shift in Tone Through Characters

Characters can change the tone of a story through their behavior and actions. Sometimes just the presence of a character can alter the tone. For example:

Fig. 2 - Setting is one of seven ways an author can create a shift in tone.

The tone of this scenario is romantic. We as readers understand that Shelly and Matt are on a date.

The romantic tone has shifted to a more tense tone because of the presence of the second man. There were no words spoken, but readers can perceive tension in the scene, knowing that the tone is no longer romantic—but has shifted to suit a different situation.

Shift in Tone Through Actions

Like the presence of a particular character, the actions of characters can also cause a tone shift. Let's see what happens if the ruined date scene continues:

The tension in the tone intensifies because of the way Matt reacted to the presence of the second man, Theo. Again, no dialogue is necessary in this instance because the reader can sense that the focus is no longer on the romantic couple but is now on the tension between her and the two rival men.

Shift in Tone Through Dialogue

Although it isn't necessary for a character to speak to create a shift in tone, dialogue does have a great impact on tone. See how dialogue affects the tone in the last example with the date-gone-wrong:

The tone has once again changed. Now the tone is shocking and surprising with this revelation that Shelly was cheating on Matt with his brother. Perhaps this is news to Shelly, the audience, or both.

Shift in Tone Through Attitude

Tone communicates the attitude of the author toward certain subjects. Meanwhile, the attitude of the character or speaker can communicate the tonal shifts of the writing.

This sentence could be a simple statement of fact. Or, if there is something in the context (remember context clues) to indicate that the speaker doesn't like their mom's cooking, then you might read an attitude of dissatisfaction in the statement.

Shift of Tone Through Irony

Irony can directly affect tonal shifts. Remember, irony is the expression of one's meaning using words that mean the opposite.

Shifts of Tone Through Author's Word Choice

A single word can sometimes shift the tone of someone's writing. Think of the difference in tone between the two following sentences.

All that changed was a single word, but the tone changed from neutral to scary with just that one word. Think also of the significance of changing the word "rain" to "deluge" or "carefully" to "compulsively." These single words change not only the meaning of the sentence they're in but also the tone of the situation they describe.

Tone Shift in Poetry

Although poetry can take many forms and shapes, some patterns and trends have emerged that poets intentionally use to shift tone. One such trend is a "volta," which means "turn" in Italian. Volta was originally used in sonnets to express a shift in thought or argument, but it has come to be used more widely in poetry.

The poem "A Barred Owl" (2000) by Richard Wilbur contains a shift in tone from one stanza to another:

The tone of the first stanza is calm and domestic, as indicated by the imagery of a child's room and a parent's assurance that the bird is asking simply, "Who cooks for you?" Then in the second stanza, the tone shifts to a more sinister one as the poem highlights the false sense of calm we create to deal with the harsh realities of our world. We feel this shift with the use of words such as "terrors," "stealthy," "claw," and "raw."

Every time we see a shift of tone, or tonal shift, there is a meaning behind it. This shift is perhaps a warning, or at the very least, a wake-up call to recognize the vicious reality of nature. This shift gives the poem nuance and makes it intriguing and enjoyable to read.